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2009 Scarlet Boa

Scene #97

The House of Franelli

Open House

“Hi, I'm Madelyn Smith of Banker Trust Realty, would you like a tour?” She tossed her bleach blond hair to one side, forced a smile and made a sweeping motion with her hand to invite the couple in.

“Hi, I'm Jim Bentz and this is my wife Ellen. Say, this is a rather nice house inside. I was a bit put off by the green concrete instead of a front lawn.”

“Yes, the house was owned by a concrete contractor. I debated whether we should remove the concrete and roll in a lawn.”

“Jim!” Ellen whispered, “Did you just pat me on the butt?”

“No.” Jim laughed and furrowed his eyebrows like he always did when Ellen said something out of the ordinary.

“I also hear voices speaking some foreign language, I think it's Italian.” She whispered again.

Madelyn picked up on the end of her sentence, “Yes, they were Italian; did you know them?”

“No. How did they die!”

Jim glanced at Ellen with a irritated squint, “What makes you think they died?”

“They were killed in an auto accident over a year ago. You must have read about it, the whole family went off the road at Devil's Slide into the Pacific Ocean.” Madelyn explained, her face was drawn with a sinking feeling of a lost sale.

“Jim, I want this house! It's perfect!” Ellen exclaimed.

“I… I don't know. Your freaking me out right now.” Jim's mouth hung open as if to question the air.

“Jim, close your mouth, your going to catch flies!”

“I… I don't understand. You want a haunted house?” Jim puzzled.

“No Jim, not any haunted house. I want THIS house with friendly spirits. They are inviting us in.”

“Madelyn, the spirits have spoken! Draw up the papers.” Jim spoke with an air of resignation.

First Night

Jim and Ellen spent almost the entire day unpacking boxes. It was 9:30 PM and they were both exhausted.

“I have heard anything about your ghosts?” Jim was taking off his clothes and throwing them in the corner getting ready to take a shower.

“Jim, there is a hamper in the bathroom. And, no, I don't seem to be tuned to that channel right now.

Jim dutifully picked up the pile of clothed and dumped them in the hamper on the way into the shower.

She sat down on the bed and took in the view of the room and what she could see of the bathroom and the family room through the doorways. She thought she saw three figures in the family room doorway but when she looked straight at the doorway they were gone. She removed her blouse and then attempted to remove her bra. She always had difficulty unhooking the bra and usually ended up pulling it up over her head. This time as she tried to reach the hooks she felt a helping hand undo the hooks. “Thanks, I think.” She whispered.

Jim returned to the bedroom in a towel, “Your turn.”

Ellen entered the shower and proceeded to quickly wash feeling a bit vulnerable to eyes unseen. As she tried to wash her back again a helping hand rubbed the suds around on her back. As she relaxed the hands started to explore beyond her back and she stiffened up, turned her back to the shower and rinsed. “Your getting fresh!” she whispered.

“Bella Donna” She heard, not one but a chorus of three male voices. While completing the sale she learned that Jonny Franelli had two late teen sons Michael and Dennis and his wife Bettina were all lost in the accident. She sensed that Bettina was not with them but must have moved on to a higher plane. This is going to be a bit different than she originally thought.


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