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2009 Scarlet Boa

Scene #75

Crumbled stone walls. Rusty doors. Ancient cots. A cemetery filled with bodies of killers, thieves and rapists.

These were the remnants of Oak Hills Penitentiary, closed down nearly thirty years ago when the upkeep outweighed the benefits of keeping it open. For a century, hardened criminals lived behind these walls. Several riots had occurred. Many convicts and guards had lost their lives on these grounds.

While it was open, stories circulated of ghosts pulling harmless pranks on the employees. Things moved on their own. Lights went on and off. Apparitions were seen. It would appear that there were several spirits roaming the building, out to frighten those who were present. In reality, it was only one spirit - Mad Dog Mathers.

Mad Dog was the epitome of evil. Between 1891 and 1898, he led a gang of ruthless killers through eighteen train robberies. Thirty-two innocent victims died at the hands of unstoppable foes.

A posse of lawmakers pursued Mad Dog's group. In a brutal shootout, Mad Dog was the only desperado left alive, wounded severely, but too stubborn to die. He was sentenced to Oak Hills. Guards tortured him. Mad Dog, consumed by rage against the prison personnel who dished out and condoned his horrible treatment, was hanged after a mere six weeks.

Twenty years after the prison closed, a wealthy buyer bought the property to run tours through the well-known facility. A few groups passed through each day. The owner made a great deal of money from his venture.

Often, little things would happen to those who worked alone. A door opened or closed, an unexplained shadow moved about. These moments were selling points for the tours. Word spread that the penitentiary was haunted and more people came to see ghosts for their selves.

Max, twenty-two years old, was the newest tour guide. He was a little leery of taking the job with the ghost stories he heard, but after two months, he could happily say he had never experienced any paranormal activity. People wasted fifteen bucks for adults and seven for children under twelve for a chance to experience supernatural occurrences.

It was Saturday afternoon. Max, dressed in his tour guide uniform, finished his mid-day tour. His group, nine adults and three children, were disappointed. They had not seen any ghosts, or happenings of the extraordinary type. That was the main reason all had taken the tour; just that chance they might see something unusual.

Max led his group down a hall, lit by scattered overhead lights. "I hope you enjoyed your tour," he announced, sounding like he was reading straight out of a training manual. "Are there any questions?"

A little boy, nine years old, geekish glasses, a genius type, spoke up. "I didn't see any ghosts."

Max stopped the group. This was a question he heard on every tour and it started to weigh heavily on his nerves. "That's not a question," Max stated, "and where did you hear that?"

"From my friends," the boy answered.

"I find that hard to believe."

"That there are ghosts?"

"No, that you have friends."

While Max laughed at his own humor, no one else did in the crowd. Max straightened. "Completely false," he told the boy. He was supposed to play on the whole ghost thing, but felt it would be more fun to deny the rumors to this know-it-all child. "Sure, there are unexplainable noises sometimes, but the building is nearly a hundred and fifty years old."

Max led his group to double exit doors at the end of the hall and unlocked one with a key. "Be sure to tell your friends," he said as he pushed open the door.

As the group passed by to exit, a man mumbled, "What a rip-off."

Max waved briefly. "Come again!" He closed the door, his fake enthusiasm fading to distaste for his career choice. "This job sucks."

A loud clank down the hall startled Max. It was normal to hear such noises during the day when workers were doing various tasks, but now that he stood alone in the eerie surroundings, his imagination soared.

"Billy?" he asked as he wandered slowly down the hall. Billy was a janitor assigned to the area so it was possible he had knocked over his cart or a metal trashcan. No verbal response came, but another clank was even louder than the first.

Max continues on his course, eyes glued to a bend in the hall just down from him. Scuffling became audible. Max's heart beat hard within his chest, but he continued. Curiosity was truly a dangerous thing.

The scuffling was even closer now. The source sounded like it was right around the corner.

A dark shadow, void of any real shape, crept across the floor, heading in his direction. There was something about the way it seemed to float. Something unnatural.

A chill swept up Max's spine. The area felt cold suddenly. Fear took over. Not just fear, but panic. Max fled down the hall to the exit doors. The eerie shadow raced after him.

Max's hand quivered as he searched his pocket for the correct key. Once he had it, he trembled as he tried to fit it into the lock. The shadow was almost upon him.

Max unlocked one door and opened it. Looking back, he fled down the sidewalk, never to return. He would be fired for leaving his post. That did not matter at the moment. His life meant much more to him.

The door closed as the shadow arrived. In the limited light, the dark abomination seemed to bump into the metal surface, instantly stopping. The shadow loomed there as a maniacal laughing seemed to accompany it. A lunatic's laughter.

The floor swallowed the dark shadowy presence, the eerie cackling with it. The hall was quiet, too quiet. The evil presence left behind an air of unease that would be felt by the next tour group passing through in less than an hour...


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