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2009 Scarlet Boa

Scene #60

Luke knew for a long time that a clairvoyant gift was a joke. In his 15 years as a detective he'd yet to meet anyone who could truly see into the future. Sitting at his desk, he looked again at the young, auburn haired woman who stood before him. Her arms were crossed as she continued to glare at him with fiery green eyes.

“Sergeant, why won't you believe me? I'm telling you that someone is going to die tonight if you don't do something to stop it!” Luke tapped a pencil against his spiral notebook with one hand as he pushed a pre-printed form across his desk in her direction with the other.

“Please give us your statement, along with your name, address and phone number and we'll check into it.” The woman smacked her palms against the edge of his desk and leaned forward, invading his personal space. Her voice rose above the normal noise level of the squad room.

“What do I have to do to be taken seriously?” Luke dropped his pencil and folded his hands on the desktop, stretching his large frame back into the chair.

“Ms…”

“Waldron. Jackie Waldron.”

“Ms. Waldron, you have to see this from my point of view. You don't know who this person is that you claim is going to be shot or the person who will do the shooting. You don't know where this is going to happen; only that it's going to take place tonight at about 7:45. I'm not trying to give you a hard time, but I'm not sure where to start an investigation. Is there anything else you can give me to go on?” The woman stood up straight, returning to her normal height as her features softened.

“I saw the back door to a restaurant, or bar. Somewhere that has an industrial kitchen leading directly outside into an alley. The woman knew her killer, when she came out of the door there was a look of recognition on her face, but she wasn't happy to see him. The feeling I got was that his appearance annoyed her, almost as if he was bothering her by showing up. She wasn't afraid of him until he grabbed her and forced her into his car.”

“Could you tell what kind of car he was driving?” She shook her head.

“Did she have to step up to get into the vehicle, like a pick up or SUV?”

“No.” Luke inhaled deeply, trying hard not to loose his patience.

“Ok. Do you think you could work with a sketch artist to give us an idea of what either of these people look like?”

“Sure. But I never saw the killer, just the girl.”

“So you don't even know if the killer was a man.” She stammered.

“Well… no. I just got the feeling that he was.” He looked across the room as another detective approached him.

“Collins, do you have a minute to work up a sketch?”

“Yeah.” The other man grabbed a sketch pad and a pencil, and came to sit alongside the young woman as the squad Captain's door opened.

“Luke, I need to see you a minute?”

“Yes sir.” Addressing his co-worker and the young woman he said,

“I'll be right back.” They were already heavily engrossed in features beginning to take shape on the sketch pad.

About 5 minutes later, Luke returned and took a seat behind his desk. The woman he had been interviewing was staring off into space as Collins cleared his throat.

“Ah, Sarge?” Luke looked over at the other officer who held up the sketch pad in front of him. The picture that stared back at him had sparkling emerald eyes and soft reddish-brown hair and looked remarkably like… He glanced over at Jackie Waldron, who now looked at him with those same eyes that Collins had captured so vividly on paper.

“Ms. Collins, is this some sort of prank?” Her voice sounded far away as she spoke,

“I told you someone was going to die tonight. Unless you stopped it.” A loud crack resounded from behind him as a round red hole burst onto her forehead. Her eyes instantly glazed as she fell back into Collins lap which was now turning crimson. As he looked at the woman in horror, she vaporized like steam into thin air.

Luke sat straight up in bed, his skin slicked with sweat as he tried to remember each intricate detail of his latest vision. He hated when they came to him in the form of a dream, almost as much as he hated trying to figure out what they meant when he woke up. He grabbed the pad and pencil that sat on his nightstand and jotted down quick notes before his mind's warning completely eluded him.

He'd known for a long time that a clairvoyant gift was a joke. Unfortunately, he thought, the joke was on him.


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